Monday 6 October 2014

Romeo and Juliet Projects

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  1. linda9507 October 2014 at 07:22

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    1. Unknown14 October 2014 at 07:33

      The grammar was a little to complex for children, but it was still done well.

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    2. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:48

      I think the story was changed quite nicely to appeal to younger children. But I did notice that some of the sentences were messy. You also seemed to use the word 'and' a lot. Try to use a different word.
      -Natasha

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    3. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:49

      really interesting and creative. it was really well done.
      -Carlee

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    4. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:50

      The grammar was a little too complex for children, but other then that it was really good.

      -Hunter

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  2. Anonymous7 October 2014 at 07:46

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  3. Devon TImko8 October 2014 at 07:01

    https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=779FE52E7902D9FE!106&authkey=!ALI9PI7yxPDp8tU&ithint=file%2cpptx

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    1. linda95014 October 2014 at 07:29

      very creative, watch your grammer

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    2. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:40

      it was creative and interesting but watch your grammar.
      -Carlee

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    3. Unknown14 October 2014 at 07:45

      Good word bud

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    4. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:51

      You really wrote the journal entrees just like how he spoke but I believe that you should have added a bit more to one and two -Allison

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    5. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 08:49

      Use complete words -David

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  4. Anonymous9 October 2014 at 06:47

    Gibson

    https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=46776535A9C4DC12!106&authkey=!APVsf882YLh4odk&ithint=file%2cdocx

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    1. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:35

      I liked that you gave your opinion about fate at the very beginning. When you write about fate, you sometimes go a bit off topic.
      -Natasha

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    2. linda95014 October 2014 at 07:39

      your opinion is well stated and try to stay on topic

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    3. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:44

      I liked that you included your opinion in your response but try to stay on topic more when you were writing about fate.
      -Carlee

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    4. Unknown21 October 2014 at 17:43

      It has a really nice speech and it is not to short theo

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  5. Anonymous9 October 2014 at 07:04

    Redwood-Scribe

    https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=574775710A6624A2!106&authkey=!AJYCTzg9Eghje8o&ithint=file%2cdocx

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    1. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:30

      I think it was pretty well done. you used a lot of detail and your opinion makes it more interesting.
      -Carlee

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    2. linda95014 October 2014 at 07:32

      this is very good and goes well with the story. watch your grammer

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    3. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:36

      I liked how much of your opinion you put into this project but I think you should have added another quote to back up your point. -Allison

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    4. Unknown14 October 2014 at 07:42

      I like how you stated your opinion throughout your project which made it enjoying to read.

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    5. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:49

      I liked how you structured your project but you need to watch out for grammer
      -Alix

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  6. Unknown14 October 2014 at 07:19

    https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=7532C8E84BC59AAA!104&authkey=!AEfzYEhcA-jsbJ4&ithint=file%2cpptx

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    1. linda95014 October 2014 at 07:28

      very good. watch your commas

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    2. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:33

      It was over all really good but it was kinda hard to read so you might just want to type it on the computer.
      -Carlee

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    3. Unknown21 October 2014 at 17:37

      The pictures are a little bit wiggly so i couldn't read all things but that what i read was nice theo

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  7. linda95014 October 2014 at 07:22

    very creative, you could have changed the ending because it is a childrens book

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  8. Unknown14 October 2014 at 07:27

    Dade Fuerst

    https://onedrive.live.com/view.aspx?cid=4F42A74888CB74AF&resid=4F42A74888CB74AF%21106&app=PowerPoint

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  9. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:27

    Your storybook stuck to the main story pretty well. I found that some words you used to much. An example would be 'and'. Try to use different words.
    -Natasha

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  10. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:32

    I really liked how you wrote a lot at the beginning of every page to make the story make sense to little kids. But I think the pictures could be better by keep the characters the same people because it was kinda weird to see romeo in the 18th century and then in 20th centnury. -Allison

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  11. nicolas poulin14 October 2014 at 07:34

    hey

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  12. nicolas poulin14 October 2014 at 07:35

    https://onedrive.live.com/view.aspx?cid=2D9809D2F56D1660&resid=2D9809D2F56D1660%21476&app=Word

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  13. Unknown14 October 2014 at 07:38

    Work on your grammar, needs more complexity.

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  14. Unknown14 October 2014 at 07:40

    https://www.dropbox.com/s/e10ei396o8x1vzi/Romeo%20and%20juliet.docx?dl=0

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  15. Unknown14 October 2014 at 07:41

    eckel

    https://www.dropbox.com/s/957botmtrf8eeqd/Romeo%20and%20Juliet%20Children%20book.pdf?dl=0

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  16. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:41

    over all I liked your journal entry, but some parts were wrong like you wrote that romeo had the idea of crashing the party but it was his friends who convinced him into going to the party.
    -Alix

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  17. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:43

    1.TOOOOOOO SHORRTTTT 2. Explain it better a lot 3. Good with the use of the quotes.

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  18. linda95014 October 2014 at 07:44

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  19. haleyk14 October 2014 at 07:45

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  20. linda95014 October 2014 at 07:46

    https://www.dropbox.com/s/1vhui7f8ee9tnhe/Romeo%20%26%20Juliet.pptx?dl=0

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    1. Unknown17 October 2014 at 07:14

      good job with adding lots of information.

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    2. Unknown17 October 2014 at 07:16

      try to improve your spelling and grammar

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    3. Unknown21 October 2014 at 17:40

      You desinged it really nice theo

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  21. haleyk14 October 2014 at 07:48

    https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=12FB393EAD0190A!116&authkey=!ADGtWXVBEJTi56g&ithint=file%2cpptx

    haleykubay

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    1. Unknown14 October 2014 at 07:51

      explain the quotes, be more creative like the background but good with the choosen of pictures

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    2. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:51

      Really well done. It was very interesting and creative
      -Carlee

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    3. linda95014 October 2014 at 07:52

      i like how there isnt a lot of words, thats how a childrens book should be. You mis spelled asleep, it says aslpeep

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    4. Unknown17 October 2014 at 07:10

      you could have put a little more effort into this project.

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    5. Unknown17 October 2014 at 07:13

      you did a good job with the quotes

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    6. Unknown21 October 2014 at 17:48

      You use pictures from diffrent movies , i think take the next time only from one movie picture's theo

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  22. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 07:53

    I liked the idea of the journal entries, but you need to explain more on what's going on in the journals. You also need to work on grammar.
    -Natasha

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  23. Anonymous14 October 2014 at 08:59

    Work on your literature -David

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  24. Unknown15 October 2014 at 10:34

    ANDREW LY's https://onedrive.live.com/redir?page=view&resid=7532C8E84BC59AAA!121&authkey=!AAX550XTmu_dJYc

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  25. Unknown15 October 2014 at 10:37

    https://onedrive.live.com/redir?page=view&resid=7532C8E84BC59AAA!119&authkey=!AKAlgHtnFmA8Vy8

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    1. Unknown17 October 2014 at 07:05

      you did a good job trying to use Shakespearean language

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    2. Unknown17 October 2014 at 07:06

      you could improve your grammer.

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    3. Unknown17 October 2014 at 07:10

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  26. Unknown17 October 2014 at 07:00

    https://www.dropbox.com/s/jafbs081r812cid/Photo%20Oct%2014%2C%209%2010%2013%20AM.jpg?dl=0

    https://www.dropbox.com/s/gr4r2i2sikvc1mb/Photo%20Oct%2014%2C%209%2010%2028%20AM.jpg?dl=0

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    https://www.dropbox.com/s/fl42xtfxtqrh261/Photo%20Oct%2014%2C%209%2011%2049%20AM.jpg?dl=0

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  27. Anonymous17 October 2014 at 10:54

    for a kids story it doesn't explain to much of what is going on, could have used more explanation.

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  28. Anonymous17 October 2014 at 15:01

    https://www.dropbox.com/s/gp4opj7uyb3gg9z/Romeo%20%26%20Juliethanneson.pptx?dl=0

    -Alix Hanneson

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  29. Unknown21 October 2014 at 17:32

    i think you used a little bit slang

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  30. Anonymous9 December 2014 at 12:34

    Nic Poulin

    https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=2D9809D2F56D1660!476&authkey=!AN_9pBEoglW0hEc&ithint=file%2cdocx

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